Funny concept
The art style isn't my favourite, varying line weights make things look much nicer. I didn't plan on reviewing this but the user who may still be directly below my comment just made me laugh. Cancer is a touchy subject, but there should be no tabbo subjects. In any case, there is such thing as natural population control, he should look into it.
What's wrong with cold showers?
I like 'em on occasion. This was pretty funny, the only other part tha tbothered me was the toilet-shower thing. I don't know how they do plumbing where you live, but in any of the places I've ever taken a shower, the toilet and shower in no way affect eachother, beyond maybe, just maybe, water pressure. It's something bothers me because veery TV show ever eventually makes a reference to that sort of thing.
You knocked off that other GOOD claymation!
Check the old frontpage flashes for the one you knocked off, you'd learn a thing or two from it.
you mean Mack Productions? im his claymation mentor
everything he does was taught by me.
You should teach knox a lesson
On how to model basic figures and animation. This was entertaining and animated very well, unlike SOME claymators...
Nice you're still riding the coattails...
of the clock crew. Get your own sctick, please. OR at least try and make these funny! Right now they're just lame knock offs that don't even get to factor in the ironic humour of ythe clock crew since you're not the original; you have no stwarberry lock mythos to build upon either!
lern2funny
Decent tutorial
But that's pretty basic stuff taught in most elemntary art classes. Having to use guidlines so extensively can be a slow and crutch-like, but it's fine for a begginer. Also your text perspective was off! In a perspective tutorial, that's a no-no. Here's a hint on putting text in perspective, have it rotated and tilted to the angle of the building lnie above it, and have its skew to match the wall-line to right or left of it. (www dot gameforest dot com/images/2005/wipjen dot png) There are some examples in there, hard to see withotu the ability to zoom. Mine in isometric view, but the perspective still applies. In normal perspectie words might get noticably smaller eventually depending on where it's placed however.
Pretty funny!
The lines you used were too messy though. It looks like you drew them in tiny litle strokes instead of good, long, consistant ones. It just looks bad, especially in contrast to the nice animation.
I see your point...
But as the head of the Anti-Human party, I cannot morally be anti-pollution. I have a moral obligation to be pro-pollution, and that's just how it is. It's for the greater good I'm afraid.
Nice flash though, cute penguins too!
Ignore shaoloon
He doesn't know what he's talking about, nothing wrong with "a banch of simbols." The animation was again awesome, and the voiceacting superb. These things are great, the sort of flash you see goto DVD.
I think you missed the point of the song...
by a really long mark, too. The drawings could use a little touching up in the anatomy department, but it was stioll better than many NG movies. When I go through phases where I like SOAD, this is usual;ly one of my favourite songs. Rock on corporate rock!
How many times... I don't wanna aniamte a mass orgy =P
As for the anatomy thing... Well, I started this ages ago (when I still getting used to my drawing tablet) and then came back to it last week... That's probably why there's such a drastice change.
But don't worry, since the my drawing skills have improved a lot, and I hope it shows in my next movie ;)
Thanks for the review... Just hope you liked it ;)
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